Front cover design work in progression

Positives of my work so far..

• Looks like a front cover layout
• I have used a variety of different fonts and pointing
• I have generally used an appropriate register and language for my slightly older but still youthful audience. In particular the second coverline language could be too formal.

 Improvements to be done...

• Currently I am unsure whether the colour pallete is appropriate for the pop subgenre, although my target audience are slightly older and so it doesn't want to be too bright. Also the main image will connote to pop and so make it clearer what sub genre it is.
• Some of the font could be made smaller so I have space for coverlines
• Add a main image